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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome thriller, it had me gasping and cringing but unable to stop reading...The twists and turns and unexpected sub plots kept me intrigued and glued to my computer…Can't wait for you to post more stories...
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story keeps getting better and better. You have honestly captured my full attention, and thats not easy. Quite an accomplishment! I enjoy every minute of this story. My guess of who the "masked person" is, is the male cop. I am horrible with names... I cant wait for the next chapter! Your so cruel leaving it hanging like that. I almost punched my computer monitor. Keep on updating! Tis a wonderful story, and very original.
Keep up the good work!
Have an excellent day!
-Meagan
Keep up the good work!
Have an excellent day!
-Meagan
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter, as usual. You are very good at the characters emotions and you do excellent pathos. I really love it! Update again soon!
Have a good day!
-Meagan
Have a good day!
-Meagan
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So far so good. I liked how you jumped right into the story-with him sitting in the room-Oh, and thanks for the review :)
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yikes! lol! Very disturbing. But intriguing. Oh, yes, there'll be at least one more addition to my story Little Girl. So check it out sometime. It'll be up soon. Bye!
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG anthony you are bugged......what goes on in your mind........the ending of that chapter was a twist and gross.........keep it up..........can't wait till you write the next one..........
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, good story so far. Very well written. Keep up the good work.
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy readin your story so far, where do you get you ideas from? There very vivid and extreme like the part where the kidnapper throws alchol on the open wound I felt carls pain and ouch keep writing more and I can't wait to read the two parts.
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice story man
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg I just finished reading your story and I have to say omg. I think this is a good story and I can't wait to see how it ends and what you come up with next. I love how you add little witty remarks. And yes I was laughing my ass off but your writing is very good and I hope that you can some how get your story published I would buy it. **** 4 out 4 stars for me
-shante ~one and only love princess~*mwah*
-shante ~one and only love princess~*mwah*