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! =D i love thiS!

hnope u update soon love it

This is a great story. Your characters are well rounded, interesting, and flawed enough to be interesting. Your plot is a little cliche, but the story is written well enough to overshadow that. Also, your love scenes are believable and well... hot. lol But, I do have a suggestion; I noticed that after Anya and Adrian starting having sex, you included at least one sex scene in every following chapter. I don't know your reason for doing this, and maybe you don't plan on doing that from now on, but if you do, I would suggest cutting back a little to keep the plot in tact. Too much smut has a tendency to smother a story. Again, just a little constructive criticism, I hope you don't mind. Nice job so far, and I look forward to reading more.

I am absolutely in love with this story, I keep coming back looking for more. I'm happy they finally reazlied they love each other, for your first story...you are doing AMAZING! I cannot wait for more, I hope there's more coming soon and more stories from you in the future! Keep it up please!!!

love the story i wish i was her lol cant wait for more

oh...my ....god....that was so f*ck'n hot!!!!

man, that was hot!!! Carter is funny! I love all the boys. Waiting for more! ^_^

I started reading your story and I wanted to leave a review to let you know that I am enjoying it. This is nicely written and I look forward to seeing where you take it.

About damn time. Just kidding...I'm so glad they're finally on the same page. Yay! You still rock, I can't wait for more.

it's all right, I can't tell you were distracted. They're all good! =) thank you for updating so often!!