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for Two-Way Monologues

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person CedeBlues
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story one of the best I have ever read. I love your character\'s personality and I also admire your ability to write stories this well.



Lubbz,

Mercedes

P.S- Stay original
person huelust
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is great! I love your dialogue, particularly the pillow talk :-) The characters' voices are so clear I feel like I'm spying.
Thanks for reviewing my story, btw!

person blondiexoxo
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awww its so cute
person Empress
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Making sure you've got a really great story is one thing but perfectionism is nuts. You are a truly talented writer. Stop beating up on yourself. Amazing 14 chapters so far.
person Anne
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Can't wait for more.
person Anon
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i want a boyfriend like adrian
person Anon
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay, thank u for updating me =D i hope adrian's not using anya just for sex 'cuz that would SUCK, how didju come up with the persnal assstant promotion, maybe that's wat i want to be, lovin the story, keep it up! =)
person It's Just Me
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great Great Great! You're such an awesome writer! Sorry I've been behind on reviews, life...what a drag ya know? I love adrian more and more, he's so great! This story keeps getting better! You rock!
Keep rocking on!
person lazymonkey
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sex scenes are hot but im wondering where are you going to take this? It really seeems like Adrian's getting really hooked on sex with Anya though. can't wait to read more!
person Anon
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay i love the story line if u wouldn't mind, please email me at idunk24@yahoo.com when u update? thanks !!