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by abakus

schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I can't believe you've gotten only one review. This was so well written, so different from the usual Master/slave fic in which the trembling little boy is really just a girl in disguise, and comes to love his Master in the classic Stokholm Syndrome way. Your main character has a very original and believable voice. Your command of his innner dialogue is really impressive.

Thank you. Nice work.
person Kiira
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was really good! I felt so sad when Cohn died, I`m still sad, but then he got reunited with him in after life. And he had his revenge! For some reason I just like these kind of story`s that has a little, hmm... "Romeo&Juliet" thing going on, even though they do make me sad.