rate_review Reviews

thank you for creating such an interesting place. i can't wait to see what will happen next. Artemis has put himself in quite a position, hasn't he?! And i find myself curious about his new friends, too. Rane sounds like an interesting fellow. I like how clear your characters' temperaments are, i can almost expect what type of reaction artemis will have to something. that's a lot, for a first chapter. if you don't mind me asking, though, do you have a beta tester? i find it's invaluable. just for little... grammatical things. other than that, great job!! now i'm off to read some of your other stuff. thanks again!

Hehehehee, this seems like quite an excellent story, really good stuff, i love it.