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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update!
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good, but during the fight sequence, it sometimes got confusing with all the "him" and hers" running about. at some times, i couldnt tell who was getting stabbed. othewise, great chapter. i cant wait for the next installment.
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YES!! Fantastic chapter, the action was REALLY full of suspense, i loved it... this story rocks, update again soon!
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
whoo, this is getting REALLY good now... update again soon, please.
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeesh! you have a blood-thirsty mind!
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, your story moves. i think i might be a teeny tiny bit jealous of that particular ability. and lanthander's torture is absolutely disgusting, truly conscienceless... it's awesome and amazing and hurts me to look at it. very cool. might want to run your spellcheck and grammar check over it tho. anywho, definitely cool beans. :)
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
incredible use of the corkscrew. and not even my twisted mind thought of putting the stone inside him, i thought hed put it on top artimus' head or something like that. pure genius.
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
@5 Gruesome! This chapter was aptly named. Am I correct in assuming that the wounds leave scars? If I were Rumple and Jerry, I'm not sure that I would quite trust her....
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ah yes, blame it on the beta... ^__^ so sad. seriously though.. this is getting awfully interesting. Lanthander's delicious! I thought it was kind of odd that his guild didn't have a name. Jerrieandrumple are turning out to be quite useful, and i like their loyalty. I'm glad for the promise of more Rane... i like him. 8) Raven's turning out to be quite smart, too! I'd say, keep writing the next installment, but get a whip for your beta! i did, and things are so much better now. }:)
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey give me a break! You should see it when he sends it to me, it's atrocious. Bad spelling, bad grammar, paragraphs all bunched together... At least I got him to use spell check this time! And all for fear of that dread steel pencil...