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for Birthday Present

by Zoshia

person WedsLem
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sigh.. i love this story so much.

i have strong emotional attatchment to it lol... but regardless the plot and details are fantastic...

guh.. you and your writing, so painfully pleasing ^.^
person irinutza
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very hot :)
but i wonder about slavery-is it really possible in our days to do such things?
person Avocet
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
def. happy birthday! but...does it have to be a one shot? I love Beauty and Ty, please don't stop!
person Loretta
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved it hun. It had everything, sex, sex, sex, sex and of course SEX. Looooved it hun. I hope you make more of these nice master and scared slave stories. The master is nice and have a big cock, the slave is scared but learn to love the master because he is so nice, and he is tight as a newborn baby. Mmmmmhm, love that taste.
person Twixed!
schedule July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Waaa?? i never reviewed this!!? I love this story!! But u may know that as it is saved YAAAAAAAAAY on my computer.. *cough* such an interesting and creative idea, plus wonderfull writing as always - but all for me!!!! i feel soooo unbeilievalby special. And with such a warm fuzzy ending.. you know me too well! thanks so much ! i love you!