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for In the Bus

by PepperStu

person like this
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this, please continue. I promise to read and review more!
person diamond
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story please update i want to see what happens.
person objectlesson
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yes! more!
person UKLove
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ha. What a whore.

Nice job, though. Very nice.

- UK
person Lis
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahh finally an update ^_^
I love this part too...can't wait for the next one
person O . O
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow...this is sooooooooooo good! please update this soon!
person Nimz
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update plz
person Anon
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The story is really good, my only problem with it is I just can't believe the little girl would like the taste of sperm so quickly. It took me a long time before I could even tolerate it, and even longer before I learned to like it.
person Louk
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please post the third chapter ASAP!
person Anon
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chaps, please update soon