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for In the Bus

by PepperStu

schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg i need more!
person Nothingness
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG great fanftastic story i do hope u will update soon soon please please i want to see what happens next :) arigatou
person another one
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i thought it was rather good, interested in the net chapter very much, you should make them longer
person lisa
schedule June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update soon !!!
person loco
schedule June 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good make another chapter
person Missy
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MORE, MORE, MORE PLEASE!!!! I love it! Can you make them go to the park after Samantha plays in the playground? That would be a great and *naughty* Scenario. Email me!
person sailor
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please post the third chapter....
person Henry
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story....please continue..love to read some more....find what is going to happen to the little curly haired girl....GREAT STORY
person Danna
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hm, yummy indeed!

But hey, what did he take? He sure is randy as hell, isn't he? Oh, oh, so good!!
person betty
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please please please update very very very soon!