AFF Fiction Portal
person Michiru Loves Haruka
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AAAAWWW So sweet. Lovely and well written. Keep it up.
person Jane
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was so good. I liked how they met on an off chance kind of thing. And you could tell from the start that they both liked each other. It was so sweet! It was a great story to read right before bed n.n I'll be sure to look for more of your work.
person soul-torn-n-2
schedule February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwwww that was awesome i was a bit afraid that it was going to end with lynn leaving, but it didnt, yay! i love it. also, the way you wrote the sex scene was sp tasteful and well done...telling without showing. in this case, i liked it. good job!
person Anon
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome, wonderful, magnificent, just brillent, love your work with this piece
person MW007
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW.

I mean, wow. Whoa. HOT, HOT, HOT.

HOT stuff, beautiful, perfect writing, elegant, firm, smart, and GORGEOUS.

Lovely, lovely, lovely.


person ^CH^
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Sigh* ...Now I can goto sleep happy... hehe

That made me happy..
person Anon
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty good. Maybe you should move it to the femslash category - you would probably get more hits.