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I love it. Im dying to know if they ever get together. Hopefully they will soon but please please please updat soon.

In chapter 4 I loved the way you described Callum through the eyes of Marina. How Marina describes Callum beats any love scene. Felix is an ass Marina should break up with him. That was such a good ending because it says so much about Marina and Felix's relationship. Callum and Marina may not have talked much but they have a deeper understanding of each other. Good chapter. Hey, you don't have to apologize for the chapter being short. I really appreciate you posting something especially with what's going on in your life. I'm sorry to hear about your lung infection and your grandfather's death. Please take as long as you like with the next chapter. I don't mind the wait. And definitely take care of yourself don't stress yourself out too much. Thanks for updating.

my dearrrr that chapter was amazingly excellent. and i loved it. i love it. it wasn't short, it was the perfect length, and it was worth the wait. i hope you feel better and that things start looking up for you....
Cheers,
G

This chapter was pretty short, but it was also pretty exceptional. I am sorry to hear about your grandfather, and hearing what has happened to you recently, I am surprised and grateful that you took the time to update. Hope you feel better soon.

As for chapter 3, I don't mind the delay because your chapters are pretty long. Callum is such a badass and a dick, hehe. But I like him because he's honest and he doesn't sugar coat anything about him. He's raw and real. I like how you said that Callum is an accidental hero. I think we need more accidental hero and leave the charming, sweet talking dicks in their own narcissistic world. I think Marina is starting to notice Callum because he certainly has been noticing her. This was a good chapter. Good luck with classes and writing. Thanks for updating.

I wonder what he will do next. He better do something, because it looks like this girl is going to kill him in more ways than one.

I've enjoyed chapter 2 because Callum is funny. It was a long chapter so it was worth the wait. I'm sorry I hope you get over your writer's block soon. I like how Callum doesn't try to be anything but himself. His charm is him trying not to be charming if that makes sense. Marina seems pretty naive but I'm glad she's not blind of her situation with Felix. Felix is an ass and a total hypocrite. I like Emma as well she tells Marina what she needs to hear. Thanks for updating.

I likeeeee...especially how you keep it moving, not stuck in the same place in terms of plot...

-G

I love how your stories are so interesting. You have complex and engaging characters which is rare in the Romance section. No one wants to take a chance to write a realistic and unconventional story because they feel their audience won't like it or be able to appreciate it. But your stories do just that and they do it so well.

Callum is lovably annoying and his brooding makes him so very sexy. I hope his gets a chance to tell Marina how he feels.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewing chapter 1, damn, Felix is going out with Marina. Callum’s POV makes me laugh. I knew it Felix is cheating on Marina just by the way she described him being distance and then the smell of roses on him. I can’t believe Marina is taking this shitty behavior from Felix. She has to acknowledge there is something wrong with Felix’s attitudes towards her. It’s getting good and you’re writing is flawless. Thanks for updating.