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April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
is this real?
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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You lost me right away. First she wears a pantsuit, you say, and then you talk about how her SKIRT was taken off. o_o If you can\'t keep your own story straight, you shouln\'t expect anyone else to, either.
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January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DONT SELL YOURSELF SHORT!!! It was rather good. I enjoyed it, you should absolutely write more.
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December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!!!! Make More...
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December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it was ok
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November 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That girl got that bad, continue.
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May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. anymore???????
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April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It makes you wonder, really. The sex seemed a bit short, almost as if it was developing a plot then suddenly went pointless. It started out well for a rape from first person view, but you need to add more detail and not make it run so quickly. For those who actually get off at reading, you gear us up to the point of release then just suddenly stop. Good idea though, I can give you that.
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March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOH, that is all I can say. If this is your first story with rape, you did well your first time.
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March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOH, that is all I can say. If this is your first story with rape, you did well your first time.