rate_review Reviews

Pretty good trin-san, even if i'm going to have to read it again to fully understand it. Maybe it'd help if you wrote a little extra to clarify a few things. But then again you said this was a one shot story, so i guess i'll just have to heckle you when you've got some spare time. I usually find it a lot easier to get into the story once i've known the characters and i can really get into the drama that takes place when i read too. But other than the fact that things were kind of blurry to where you weren't totally sure what was going on it was still pretty good.
ZOMG, a review from you dearest fan Ki-chan. (oh yeah, that ryhme was just for you trin-trin!)

This is pretty good, I really would like to read more of this;)