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for The Scorpion's Sting

by gothdarkkedragon

person Angelica
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
uh wow. Okay. If you write in disease that would be really real. Everyone writes about fantasy and male pregnancy on here. They forget the realistic consequences of being slutty. So I will be checking back in on this story. I can't wait to see where you take this.
person Condemned_To_Life
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That is a very horny woman. I'm not sure if I would want to play with her personally. The idea of what diseases she has would be scary but the story is great. Please Update soon.



Morte De bouer
person Christy M.
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I tink I have to agree. Woman has to have aids or something if she has sex with so many people like that. I'll be it makes for interesting plot. That or more sex.
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
**nods** That's actually an interesting point that you bring up. One that will be discussed in great detail in the next couple of chapters, helping to further flesh out the characters backgrounds.
person Serendipity
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I Love Recommended reading lists. They turn you onto some really good stories. You Must, nae You WILL update or I wll not share my cookies.


person Nymph0hentai_lover
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. That is awesome. Update! wants more. Pwease?
person Butterbear
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So I saw this on Starfyre's recommended reading list. I thought I would give it a look over. You ROX! That is an awesome way to open a story. I insist you update before I get angry and turn Ware bear on you. Please? I will make cute eyes.



Butterz!!

Hugz n Kisses!!!!!!
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was one heck of a chapter to open up to. It certainly grabs the attention. I'll add it to rec reading ~Wink~ and get chapter two read next.