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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Alright, you have to write some thing new with Martello...or update something with him. I NEED more of him. lol. You writing is awesome. Can't wait to see more. Update soon please.
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just want to say: WOW. I love you're stories about the Canziano's and Martello. He's my favorite. I'm pretty much infactuated with him. I love how he's dark and mysterious and controling. He's just...ahh. lol. Great job. I can't wait to see more and learn more about Mr. Martello. I can't only imagine what it must be like to be his slave. Ugh, why does this have to be fiction?? lol.
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope you keep writing. The ending of this sounded like you were ending the entire story. Great job!
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
When I visited this site I was surprised there were not more stories written on the Mafia, (Godfather or Soprano stuff). Then I came across your stories and Holy Crap! Man, they are just what the doctor ordered. I really like the style in which you write them, I think you are like one of the few authors who does original mafia stuff. Really sweet, keep it up! Although a few of them are nearly too graphically violent for me, but I still enjoy them. I really like th e stories about Furio Any resemblence to the Furio from the Soprano's? He reminds me alot of him. Thanks for writing about stuff that alot of others don't. As soome one else said you are really good enough to get published if you want.
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Martello is just one scary fuck period! Reminds me of someone I know, but he'd be one hell of a crew member or bodyguard. Pretty cool that you named him "Martello" it's Italian for 'hammer' and often a mob euphamism for a most trusted 'right hand man'. You got a good handle on this wild and scary bunch, with all the cartoon themed crap out there it's nice to read some good cosa nostra stuff. Fiction of course... Heh, heh.
Where are you from? Your stuff has a Chicago style to it, yes?
Where are you from? Your stuff has a Chicago style to it, yes?
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Actually I was born and raised in Chicago, you have a good insight I have also lived in Philly/Jersey area and near Cincy and Cleveland. Of course NONE of these characters are based on anyone 'real' but many are composites of 'friends of friends' I have known. Thank you all for the kind reviews, they are most encouraging. Grazie~ Kanashii (A real comare at heart)
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You have a real knack for writing some erotic mob fiction. Brutal but really good, I like it. You're a real goombata, keep it up.
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Stories
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your stories about the canzianos are really good! This one ranks up there with the comare. More pleaz