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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its simplicity made it touchy.
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hm. Very articulate, well written, even tho I don't particularly like 1st person, this read well. continue, friend.
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
soo is this the end of the story or are u going to build off of it? because i enjoyed reading it. But there could be a little more description of what they were doing that whole week unless you didnt want to include that. Just a suggestion. Anyway loved it and i hope u write more to it.