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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the fact that Elizabeth is trying to break her shell by herself.
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
its good so far ... im wonndering who shes gunna end up with and hope she doesnt hurt one of them bad but w/e ur the writer lol ttyl
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah- this is my first story- and the last chapter was a little short cause i wasn't sure if i should write it or not- so i submitted what i had to date- it will be modified.....and i'll work on making the chapters longer... :)
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it's good! but the chappies are too short, and it seems to me as if ch.3 didn't have much point...a little more perhaps?
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update. Im like in the way thing are going. Which I knew more about Matt other than that he has brown hair, and the thing about the car.
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please, Please, Please continue to write this story. I was so excited to see that there was a new chapter but then kind of let down to see that it was so short. I like this story. With the lack of really good and intriguing stories being posted lately, I need this story to continue, so I have something to read. I like the characters so far, from what you have discerned about them. Just please continue to write it.
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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sounds good so far :)
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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I rwally like it so far, please continue!