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for Shyness doesn't become you

by rosie24

person aqumariel24
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOh Sorri i didn't review for the last chapter. I just read it. By the way, i LOVE U R STORY!!! Ok Im fine now. Bu that was great. Can't wait for more!!!!
person fire_eyez
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay you updated!! it was awesome..haha i liked how rob got all protective of liz...awesomeness...keep it up! lovin it so far
person Tomato soup
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UP DATE SOON!!!!!!!
person nesl247
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You better not discontinue you this story.. I haven't reviewed before to this story but I do think it is quite good.
person fire_eyez
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
im waiting for matt and liz to meet........*clocks ticking* i reallllyyyyyy liikkee this story please update soon!!!!
person blondiexoxo
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
takes a bow thannk you thank you lol ...........but ya hope neither one of the hot guys get thrit heart brokenn tho ttyl
person aquamariel24
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I love your story. I totally like where this is going. I can't wait for more. PLEASE CONTINUE!!!
person rosie
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if you guys noticed by i updated chapter 3 awhile ago- some mentioned it was too short.... :)
person Crimson Velvet
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter five seemed to have a bunch of grammatical errors, but other than that it was pretty good...can't wait for the next chapter!
person Trin
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think that this story is still really interesting and well written. I just can;t predict who she is going to end up with. I like the character Mark so far. It just seems that there is just no spark between her and him. But then again you can change that. But then there is Matt, you have finally revealed more of him and his circumstances which is great. Liz and Matt seemed to have an instant attraction but then maybe if they knew one another they wouldn't mesh or maybe they would. Continue with the good work. I hope for an update soon.