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for Shyness doesn't become you

by rosie24

person Katie
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It is not hard to put in a review for a good story.
person rosie
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow- hehe....I guess I better start the next chapter before I have a gun to my head!

:D
person lilith
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please please please get the next chapter up soon. I love this story so far and can't wait to see what happens next.
person aquamariel24
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!! WAY TO GO!! I love this chapter but not the cliffhanger :[ , I can't WAIT!!! The end was so funny. CONTINUE!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hi, luv the story. please email me when u update, idunk24@yahoo.com, thanks
person gjetyu
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The storys reilly awsome write more soon !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person blondiexoxo
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh im innterested ... so did she just leave him at the restaurant
person aquamariel24
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOOOoooh! This is getting better and better. SO Liz just blew off Mark and ran over to meet Matt? Well if she did then i like her even more. This was a great chapter. Can't wait for the next one!!! :)
person Katie
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay so Mark is being a little too big brother which just sunk all his chances. I like that. The developement of this story is really good. You flow from one person's perspective to the others seamlessly. Well done.
person fire_eyez
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter...shes taking a chance! im loving it