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for Shyness doesn't become you

by rosie24

person notoriousmarm
schedule February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story is really interesting so far. a couple times I got confused by names and stuff, like once I think you accidentally wrote violet instead of liz? it was weird. but yea, the story is really great, and my comment wasn't meant to be mean, just constructive ;] so yea, I hope you keep updating because you're a great writer!
person taye
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
story is great. i just wanted to make sure u felt happy...........lol... so keep up with whatever u are doing cause u are doing it well
person blondiexoxo
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Make mark go awayy transfer him to australia or something
person rosie
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Stina: please refer back to chapter 6 :)
person dezzy
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! you updated twice! no!! shes not supposed to say yes to mark .. at least she said it while she was thinking about matt please keep updating!!
person Anon
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please post more, I love this story. I've always been the shy girl so it's nice to be able to relate to this!
person stina
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
is she a virgin?
person laura
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
like the story so far keep it, update soon please
person Anon
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yeah mark is getting on my nerves...but i really wanna hear matts story with his brother and everything
person taye
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That's where I know your name from..........lol, wow funny huh? Well your story is very good and im suprised to see that this is the first one in your list. I'm loving it. Keep up the good work.