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for Shyness doesn't become you

by rosie24

schedule May 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hi, i was wondering if u were planning on continuing this?
person CaptJacksWench
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great Story...Can't wait for the next part...please update soon
person queenkatfood
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I think the story is going wonderfully and I can't wait for the next update...
person CRAZY BEAUTIFUL
schedule July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OK so Liz is in the midst for some serious mess right here. Although I do love Matt --- I wonder is Mark some kind of abusive boyfriend? I don't like the way he take liberties -- he seemed perfectly nice before but as soon as she gave him some notice he started making all the decisions. I can't wait for the love scenes between Liz and Matt -- hell I haven't anticipated 2 people hooking up so much since Jude and Tommy (and they still haven't so look where that's getting me!) -- anyway I love your story. A little choppy in some places -- meaning the flow was a little off at some points but other than that it was great.
person fiona
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I freaking LOVE this story. It's romantic but hot at the same time, fast paced but detailed still. It's not rushing into things but i dont feel like im never going to get to the good stuff because all of its great! You are very talented writer and Matt and Liz are a cute as hell couple while Lucy and Robert are hotter than hell lol, you have the perfect mixture of couples with the right amount of conversation vs. intimacy. Im excited for the next chapter, update soon!
person Annegelic
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is.. poor Mark :P Update soon!
person Pipp
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi just found your wonderful story, so glad she is finally letting herself feel, but she needs to set things straight with Mark before Matt finds out.

Thanks again cannot wait for the next chapter
person Katie
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Happy. Happy. Joy. Joy. I loved this story when it started. Then I went away for February and AFF went to hell and back. I feared this was like so many of the others that have just vanished into the abiss. Can you see me doing the happy dance?
person Anonymous
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please continue
person hmmm
schedule May 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE UR STORY!! but when is Liz going have enough guts to tell Mark that she doesn\'t like him and doesn\'t want to go out with him because its getting really annoying!