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May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah Alexander\'s really in a tight pinch. I can\'t imagine what will happen to him if he helps the boy escape and gets caught. I can\'t wait to learn what horror you\'re going to bring upon your once sweet and innocent characters again.
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May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOVED the picture by the way, so pretty. This reminds me I should poke a few artists to draw my characters again as well. ;-)
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May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this was a great ch. it was filled with a lot of suspense. i have to say that i held my breath when Alex was at the party waiting for something bad to happen to Elias. And when nothing bad happened just the warning of something bad my heart started racing waiting for Alex to do more than just think of a way to get Elias out. Good job! I have to say that I am very happy that Slash got transferred finally.
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March 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Seriously...I have read probably hundreds of stories, and yours was the first to make me cry. It\'s very hard for me to cry. But keep on writing this awesome story and hurry with your next update, please!!!
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March 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Alright I\'m going to read this and hopefully not cry. I stayed away from it because it sounded kind of like the english boy story and i only got as far as he being raped by that guy. I couldn\'t bare to read more. I know it si probably a good story but I don\'t like to get depressed. The descriptions are excellent by the way.
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March 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The second ch was just too sad. It was as bad as I thought it was going to be. I thought it was also a bit twisted to have the juxtaposition of the gentle scene with his little siblings and the brutality of his own rape in the same room. This is really good. I think I might last!
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March 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Alright I have to say that the mother\'s little speech of remorse ticked me off because had it not been for her stubborness none of this would have happened.
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March 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ch 4 had me crying in the library. it all just seems so hopeless please say that there is an out for him. See I knew I shouldn\'t have started reading this. I\'m just punishing myself right now unnecessary stress about someone who isn\'t even real...
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March 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah i was able to read the whole thing. And there was a ray of hope in the last chapter that may be things could change. For some reason I feel like its going to come from the lady who washes him. maybe he can hide out in the village somewhere..
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February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is very good so far, I’m actually surprised considering I didn’t know what to expect. I love Alexander’s character, very noble and wise for his young age. Keep up the good work I can’t wait to read more!!!
Angelique
Angelique