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for The silent victims.

by Kiira

person bambi4real
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thank you for the compliment. I will be writing agina in August. I liked this ch it was really sad though. I thought Elias' pledge to Alex was so bitter sweet it was heart wrenching. You really felt the emotions: hopelessness, love, and indescribable sorrow. I thought it formed a nice contrast to Alex's speech and the irony is that they don't realize that they were saying essentially the same thing. I have to say that all their anxiety is making me anxious waiting for the "other boot to fall" in a manner of speaking and knowing you it isn't going to end well.
person bambi4real
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
kiittää te ajaksi kohteliaisuudenosoitus. I-KIRJAIN jälkisäädös olla kirjaillen vanheneva kotona Korkea. I-KIRJAIN kuin nyt kuluva ch se oikeastaan haikea jos kohta. I-KIRJAIN ajatus Elias' antaa pantiksi jotta Alex joten karmea armas se kuulla kiskaiseminen. Te oikeastaan peittää huovalla emotio : epätoivoisuus , lempiä , ja kuvaamaton murehtia. I-KIRJAIN ajatus se aiemmin arka asettaa vastakkain jotta Alex's puhe ja iva on että he don't aito että he toivoisin olevani lausahtaen asia sama asia. I-KIRJAIN hankkia jotta sananvalta että aivan heidän ahdistuneisuus on ansaitseva we halukas odotus ajaksi " toinen etu jotta syksyinen " kotona continent -lta puhuva ja viekas te se isn't astuva jotta häntäpää kummuta.
person rhia
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MMmmm, I suggest that Elias and Alexander are caught and both made to suffer *evil grin* Elias is having one helluva bad case of Stockholm syndrome. They ended up together awfully fast, I mean. Not that I complain about getting more sex scenes... *cough* But I wouldn't complain about more rape either... Just a little? Phweeze? You can't deprive the hard-working Russian boys of their favorite toy! *cough* :)
person Child of the darkened moon
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You will recieve a cookie if you write more, I promise. Anyways... I really like the story even if it is dark and angsty. I feel kind of sorry for Elias.. i think thats his name. And I hope him and Alexander succeed and getting away. Although it would be great if he finds out what happens to his siblings, hopefully they live. that would be great.
person Remon Koybito
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So... you have to update fast because I NEEEEED to know they make it ok and don't die... NEED TO! Please update soon!
person Semme
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It would make more sense if Alexander would carried Elias and make him pretend to be dead and say that he died of sickness. It would make sense and be alot easier.
person Anon
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love slash. I even like rape and torture - which I thought this story would be.

And now you have a terribly abused victim beginning to love one of his kid-nappers - and want to make love to him within a week of being raped by twenty men??

Sorry - just way too off reality for me.
person darkangel1210
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have passed by this story a number of times.

I'm glad I finally decided to read it.

Please update soon, I want to see if the plan works. It would be such a shame if the two of them didn't end up together in the end.

darkangel1210


person bambi4real
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww don't kill yourself to get a ch out. we all understand if you are busy or tired after work. i think everyone is like that right now. i know I am. i loved this ch. it was what I have been waiting for...the break out! Alexander was so sweet at the end there. i totally get him. I think that he made the right choice in doing something because if the end is death either way at least this way his love won't die in a tortorious fashion.
person asdfjkl
schedule June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
UPDaaTE~!!!!!!!!!!!! GARGLE darn. :( please please?