rate_review Reviews

oh... that was... really sad... :( but touching none the less...

This is a sad sad story, you made cry! I loved everything of it, you transported me into Elias's world something that I have not had in a long while so even though there was no happy ending it was beautiful.

Your story is amazingly well-done,full of emotions and touching. But, for me Elias' memories of Emma are destroying it a bit, firstly because they're not needed, and the second...well, fans of M/M doesn't 'usually'(which means almost never) appreciate hetero in something classified as M/M, which may be silly, but it's just a change from one state to another. For me this story would be incredible if you didn't mention Elias' cries for a gf and family (they could be showed in a different way, I think...). It's hard to feel for him concentrating on EVERYTHING in the same time.

Like this the story is still very, very good... but...lacking this 'something'. Anyways thanks for writing it.

Oh my gaaawwwd........*sniff sniff* this was so sad!! Perfect example of a good angsty story though.

Oh, yay, you updated. I've shed tears over this story lots of times already and will no doubt be a blubbering mess when this story comes to a close. I've read the sequel, but I love Elias too much to get attached to Olavi/Sacha.

Man I wish I was pretty XD

I just wish somehow he could survive this and not die!

This is seriously one of my favorite original fic that I've read and I've read a lot. You've been able to convey the feelings of Elias and Alexander really well and I just love their relationship. The way they communicate with little touches here and there is so heartbreaking. I hope you update soon.

chapter seven makes me want to cry...
ASOTA

oh god! this is a sad story... PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
ASOTA