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by lizzy2006

person thoughtful
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
:) i wouldn't have minded a bit more tension but otherwise not too bad. just draw it out a bit more - can never have too much suspense!! but still, keep going!
person pizznunk
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that sucked.