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June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay I would liket to think that all of the numerous spelling mistakes in this story were from pure lazyness, and unwillingness to proof read. But honestly you spelled happiness, as happyness.
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cool story! update soon!
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is so good!
please write more!
please write more!
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story so far, I can't wait to read more. But on a more construcively criticical note I suggest you watch your spelling a little more.
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December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I Like this....I like the way you made her enjoy it when he licked her nipple. You should DEFINITLY continue with this... I love it!