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for My Demon, My Angel

by MakaiKitty

person Saminada
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this one even more then the other one! It was HOT!!x3
Thanks!
person aurora
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*licks computer screen* Delicious!!!!
person Oliver White
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so very fantastic. It was like a belated holiday X-mas gift, no pun intended. I'm so glad that I found it when I did, it made me feel chipper and utterly romantic. But just a touch of wickedness to even it all out. Do excuse the blasphemy.

-Oliver
person Bard'sApprentice
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!! XD
thank-u SO much! that was delicious & funny & SO HOOOTT & -just -Squee! ^_^
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes!! *victory dance* I was so happy when I finally saw your name online...I started checking to find your update like every five minutes...or less. o_o And I've been rewarded! It's so beautiful! I love it! Connor was sexy with his innocence in the last one, and now he's at least as sexy with his vampireyness and...seduction!

I love how you describe everything, not only all the beautiful descriptions of them and their actions, but just their emotions, the way Dorian's so protective and worried...and then the part with the scar...and Connor's shame about it? It was sweet how Dorian comforted him (at least briefly), and then awesome how he made up for it in the end. ^_^

And I love the last thing Dorian says! That was like...my favorite, most warm and fuzzy feeling in a long time. So sweet! ^_^ *hopeless romantic* *sucker for warm and fuzzy feelings*

-Moonstar