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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Brilliant piece of work!
I'm still laughing!
I'm still laughing!
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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was great! sequel please!!!!
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December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I do agree with you. There is no plot, no build-up, no story and no structure. Honestly, I can't even understand why you decided to upload it, but that's your choice.
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December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please let that be the end. The name of the story really does fit it. Maybe it should be in the comedy section. Dude, this is seriously some of the worst drivel I have ever read. So do everyone a favor and let that be then end.
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December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haha, that was a good laugh XD
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December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes, it was the worst piece of shit ever. i think you should have uploaded it to say....a trash can. at least that would have been grateful for this poor excuse of english grammar, language, and play writing.
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December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That sucked so much ass.
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December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why Thank You, everybody! I feel so loved. This piece of shit that I so lovingly wrote (or writted or wirtoieted) is finally getting the !negative! attention it deserves. Again, Thank You all so much for reviewing. It makes me smile to see that others feel that this story is trash also.
Love, Cheers, and beers,
Finky
Love, Cheers, and beers,
Finky
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December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tthat WAS really bad!!! Hahaha, I knew you had it in you, Finky. Nice...or should I say AWFUL job. Hahahaha!
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December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH Kay (sweatdrop) this is the first org. fic i have ever read, and i must say it was interesting. at the least. If yu could rewwrite the first chap to include a better sex scene,not to mention putt up the proper codes, it would be more than just shit