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for The worst story ever. Seriously.

by FINKYPUNK

person aserenity
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey! well what can I say, but um: WOW? You sound like a really gnarly person, so I know you have it in you to write something else with more "substance" or "meaning". We see sex basic everyday... so after a while.. I dunno... I think it sort of gets boring to use it to the extend of: its dirty. Sex is beautiful. and not to sound to much like a hippie: its one of the most pure things you can relate to someone else... so why don't we stop using all the slang, negative words and embrace the beauty.

And to FINKYPUNK: this wasn't just to you it was to everyone who writes these storyies so don't take it to heart. Okay? ;)
I think you have it in you to write something amazing...please do?

anyways. that's just my opinion, whew I hope I didn't bore you too much.

love,
Aserenity
person Natedog
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry if I sounded mean last time. I was a little steamed before I read your story and that is'nt your fault it's my fault. I was too pigheaded at the time.
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK, OK, guys, you got me! You got me! The Finkster is a poseur! *sob* Ya GOT me!!

Freddy...
Orange68...
jillfox07...
lipgloss...
jk...
jimmy5...

You are, in fact, all the same person, right? Well, maybe not all of you are the same person, but at least a FEW. I mean, come on, the FINKSTER couldn't have possibly gotten THAT many reviews on THE SAME DAY could he have, now??? Hahahaha! I love you all! All of you!

Playas gonna play, haters gonna hate, flamers gonna flame, Poseurs gonna Pose. It's all part of life, kids. I don't think I'm funny, or witty, or a XhardcoreX XdrunkX XpunkX...I'm just another stupid kid, trying his best to have some fuckin' fun.

Anyway...I'm gonna..uh...go do drugs and listen to the SEX PISTOLS!!!11 Because I am Hardcore. DAMN hardcore. Like, Casualties Hardcore.

Toodle-Loo, Lovely Reviwers,
The HARDCORE and Unrepenting MORAL-less FINKSTER!!!
person Natedog
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why recomend my story for reading? What did I do that was nice? Was it something from my last review? What did I do that was nice to get that for? Please tell me why.
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey guys...I updated by profile!!
person missedme
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahola. I just read your story and i'll i gots to say is "ew". didn't like it sorry, it needs to be a bit more detailed. (also why are brothers having sex?) lol :)

Yeah and I read your profile too and all your reviews, its cool how you don't care what anyone thinks, but you know impressions ARE important. How do you expect ppl to take your writing seriously if you say "I'm hardcore." like seven or eight times.
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Charmy! Thanks for the reviews. And I KNOW, i just had to add Natedog's story to my list!!! Also, the story isn't THAT bad...when compared to Simple Plan lyrics. Hahaha!

Charmy, you seem really cool!! Wooht!!!

The mAsked Finky
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the constructive critisism and the review in general, missedme. you seem pretty cool too. and you're right about the thing that folks will not/do not take me seriously...but i don't care. i don't even take myself seriously. Thanks again, though. Cuz I love reviews!!

the thing about being hardcore was a joke, but i think you knew that. anyway, i am very bored tonight. if anybody wants to keep on reviewing, you can, its all good.

missedme: CooL!
Charmy: CooL!
Everyone else who reviewed: CooL!
person Freddy
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"OMFG YOU ARE SOO HARDCORE!" is that what you want to hear? cause your profile is seriously pathetic.
"I do drugs." That's nothing to brag about loser. what do you want it to say about you? well ahonestly it says to me and my friends who go and write on this site that you're just a total poser and your stories are pointless and sickening.

thanks for that.
Freddy

person Orange68
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dude. you're not cool so just give up on the "I hate the government. I have liberty spikes. I do drugs!" shit. Because that Freddy man pretty much knows what I have been thinking. You're a fake and a loser

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