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Merry Christmas, anihyrmoonstar!

This was awesome! The characterization was awesome, and the wording was brilliant - as always!

Romantic! Hilarious, particularly the 'prostrate' line!

*wishes that she could think of a great Norm the Genie slash Christmas fic in the same amount of the time that you could think of an awesome original slash Christmas fic.*

You are a miracle - and a genderless god.

I've also started reading - but not finished - 'Prince Charming' and I think that should be on your List of Things to Update.

Awww! How sweet!

I have to be honest and say I skipped through, mostly reading the dialogue. I just don't do sap, well, though the angst was delicious. >.< Christmas will never be the same again!

Nicely done!

I have a confession to make. I've read this story again and again and I've never reviewed it. *sheepish grin* But oh my god...you know my obsession with angels reading the prologue for my book, and I adore this story. Luke is such a loveable character, and sometimes, I almost wanna beat David, but at least he's human, you know? Which I guess was the whole point. HATE Nick... of course.

I love the description in your story. It's so clear that I can almost hear the rustling of the silk against the skin, and I can feel Luke's heartbeat as if though my hand is against his chest.

Beautiful!

I know its after Christmas but I couldn't help but read it. I really liked the highly detailed emotions. To think you wrote all of that in threee days. I write a little bit but I can't imagine that much and edited very well in such a short time. Writing doesnt take me too long but editing takes me forever (mostly 'cause I'm too lazy to do it - which is why I got myself a beta)! Great job and keep writing I'll be looking for more of your work.

I finally finished reading. So sorry that it took so long. Although, it made me feel like I was getting a late christmas present by waiting until January to read the ending ^_^ I loved this. It was beautifully written, the characters were well developed, and the ending left me feeling all warm and fuzzy. You get two gold stars for this one! (You're going to end up with quite a collection if you keep this up.) Now I can't wait to see what you'll come up with next. ^_^

I'm only half way through, but I decided that since I have to log off now I might as well review. I'm sorry that I took so long to read this, I really did just get behind on everything with the holidays. I just have to say that this is beautiful. Really well written and poetically worded. Kind of depressing, but that seems appropriate for a x-mas fic, IMO. I can't wait to finish it. You deserve a gold star for this one! Or should that be silver, lol? ^_^

What a beautiful Christmas present! Luke's innocence is so endearing. I adore the fact that he doesn't know about mistletoe. (And it makes perfect sense that an angel wouldn't understand all the wonderfully silly trappings that humans have added to the holiday.) And then when David is trying to explain, and Luke asks if you kiss the mistletoe -- that was hilarious. I laughed outloud. Kudos to David for finally standing up to Nick. I only wish something worse had happened to that lousy bastard. I think I'll pretend that he gets hit by a truck, or arrested for white collar crime, so that Kathryn, Luke, Lacy, and David can all be happy together. (Well, surely you didn't expect ME to balk at the idea of a non-traditional family situation...)

I loved the idea that God forgave Luke, but Luke chose to stay human. That made his sacrifice all the more meaningful. And it makes for the sort of compassionate God I'd like to believe in. (I'm not particularly religious, but I do like to think of something good and fair running the universe...) The sex was gorgeous. Tender and filled with beautifully evoked emotions, all building to a wonderful climax. Great stuff.

I hope the holidays were good to you! And I, too, look forward to the next installment of "White Rabbit".

Love,
Falcon

Wow, this was sudden... did you write this whole thing today? :o That's a lot of typing... Yes, it was wonderfully written- holy crap your writings gotten great :D- and sexy as hell and such a wonderful Christmas surprise. Almost as good of a present as my fuzzy-robe! :D Wonderful job!

And Happy Holidays!

Oh, m y god... The freaking cuteness of it all! I love it! Luke is just so damn adorable in his innocence!

And yay! David finally out Nick in his place! More or less... At least he scared the hell out of the bastard. ^_^

I like how Luke got his wings back, then willingly gave them up (and I'm glad you liked the idea I mentioned in the previous review ^_~). And David broke his fall... WArm and fuzzy feeling to the max!

I can't even begin to tell you how great and sweet and wonderful this story is! I'm saving the chapters on my computer to read them again. ^_^;

I hope you had a wonderful Christmas and I can't wait for the next chapter of White Rabbit!

i love the cliffhanger.. God has abandoned you... shivers! and Nick in WalMart... ooh does he ever disgust me! very well played, sir. the outfit luke bought is quite nice, too... my congratulations on your taste. * swings arms in an infantile tantrum * more! more! more!