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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very good yet again. you have a good flare for poetry.... you should write more, or if you have more post it. your good ~hugz~
Mar Fire
Mar Fire
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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thanks for your reviews on my poems. I like this alot. She's like that unattainable beauty.
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
she sounds mesmerizing, kind of like those girls you see in dreams that you think are the one for you, but when it comes down to it they never exist.