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June 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are really an exquisit BSDM writer. I love your Canziono stories and your other work as well. I think I enjoy it so much because you always have a good plot line and story line along with the sex. Even though I am not a HP fan I love that story as well because of the sexy and realistic BSDM scenes in it. I was hoping Diana\'s reward though would be one more hot and sensual scene with her Master!
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really neat. I can't wait to read more!
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is pretty good. It has a well developed plot and it looks like you have a wealth of knowledge about Italian mobsters or at least a really good imagination. Some issues I saw within the story were that you have grammar problems throughout the storyand some part were awkward to read, but I think that these problems could be fixed with a beta reader. I also thought you could have developed Dellano's character a bit more, other than lust, I am not really sure why she likes to be submissive with Martello. Over all this is a really good story and I look forward to your updates.
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ACH! Don't leave me hanging like that! 10-1 Krelis gets it. Your cosa nostra stories are very hot indeed, this one and betrayal are my two defnite favs. Ciao right back at ya bella donne~
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, just keeps getting better. I love all the Canziano characters, what a bunch. Don't leave us hanging damit! What's gonna happen to that asshole editor? (ha-ha) Bet he gets whacked! Victor is awesome, what a good boss for the family, and of course I have this thing for Furio Tagretta. You rock girl!
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love your storys good work please more
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really good story! Please don't leave us hanging write more, what is Martello going to do to her next?
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am really surprised you don't get more reviews on your stories. You have a very gifted voice and style in your writing that is hard to stop reading. You really are talented, there is a certain brutal rawness and yet it draws you in. Really hot and wild. I have read all your Mafia stories and they are just really stupendous, it was good to finally meet the Don in this story, Victor Canziano. Maybe he needs to be in a story he has a certain elegance about him that I want to know more of. Martello, man he is just one scary f'ing dude, I wouldn't want to meet him in a dark alley!
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
come on! more please, your mafia stuff is da bomb!!!!! whats he got in store for her next???
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon!