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OMG! Kanashii, I had to read this again. I still think this is one of the most provocative, edgy, sexy BDSM stories I have ever read. I bow to you. I just wanted to let you know! LOL!

Wonderfully written! Martel scares me, but I can imagine him being so amazingly hot! lol oh well. great job.

Wow! I just sat here and read this from start to finish without a break. It was really well plotted, with the layers of Diana's corruption and submission flowing really smoothly. There was some really arousing bits too, with the best bit for me being when Laurence carved the rose scar into Diana's back, and then pissed all over her. The sense of degredation and humiliation came across very well. That was also an interesting counterpoint to the last chapter, which was much more of a consciencious owner carefully marking his expensive and valued property. I had to look up some of the Italian! I enjoyed also the slave market scene, and Diana's emotional revulsion at actually having to kill her boss (or try to, since she nearly missed that darn vein!)

This oughta be a Scorsese movie!

Wow! This was so intense! I’m probably going to have to go sit down and read your “Tender is the Night,” because this story has drawn me in with your characters and your settings. Really, I am completely enthralled.

Of course one of my favorite books of all time, is “The Godfather.” I’ve read it over and over again, and I love Quinton Tarantino movies too. I think it’s that fascination with violent and dangerous people. You wouldn’t want to meet them in real life, but in literature they make fascinating characters.

Now Laurence Martel is so deliciously smooth and ruthless. You can just feel the power emitting from him. He kills with such cold-blooded efficacy too and is a dark and bloody seducer. Not to mention he intellectually cunning as well as a deadly fighter. Truly he is terrifying, yet so incredibly sexy too.

Then there is Diana. Martel considers her a pain slut, but I think of her more as a fear junkie, otherwise she would have never been attracted to Martel in the first place. And once Martel masters her, she is his, no question about it. Indeed she doesn’t even think about twice about it, she just goes to him. That’s how enslaved she is, getting off on her own fear. lol

I love how Diana is rather rude and brash at the beginning. Martel teaches her very quickly though, how he expects her to behave and since Martel is so powerful and charismatic, you believe her transformation.

Now your smut is disturbingly descriptive, almost breathtakingly so. It almost makes me gasp sometimes when I am reading your story. I won’t go into detail, because I don’t want to give anything away, but I can envision everything so well that Martel does to her and some of it really makes me cringe. Eeeek!
There is an elegant beauty to it though, that just pulls the reader right in. Wonderful writing really!

So in conclusion, all I have to say is, I want more! You have brought me into this world and created characters that are so alive, that I must know more. I am thrilled you have more stories about Martel that I can read. I may have to slow down though so I don’t finish them all too soon.

Bravo!

Wow. I think I'm having a heart attack or something, lol. This was amazing writing; loved how detailed and defined your characters were. (Never been more scared by someone who doesn't actually exist (takes a quick over my shoulder.) in my whole life! Thank you so much for this pleasure.

As always nice work and as before the comment is meant for the entirety of the story and not just the single chapter.

I think this one and the Ponygirl stories are my favorite along with your Harry Potter story 'House of Malfoy'. You write dark bondage and D/s so very well, very hot and erotic. Even though there is like this total fear and violence in the story it is very erotic and hot because of your talent in writing.
Keep up the nice work and I look forwards to many more stories from you.

I really need to see some new Martello stuff up soon or I'm gonna go insane. Pretty please?

How many slaves/comares/goomars/lovers/whores/pets does this guy have? Because I want to read about EVERY SINGLE ONE! I have read every original story you have written and I want more! I think Martello is undeniably ‘twisted’ but still incredibly arousing. I would love to read about Martello’s past. You had said he had lost a fiancé, and he even had the sign of a slave in ‘Betrayal’, or was it a different sign he was showing? But if it was a sign of a slave, and Martello had it…I want to know who he was a slave too… But it is up to you if you write into his past. I know that writing more about a character makes the reader like them too much or become too attached to them when you want them to be distant. But if you do, I will be the first to read it.

Nalani.

I love reading your storys!! so much fun......and i feel really weird saying that considering they are make purely of violence. Anyway please continue to write your storys, they apsolutely rock.

-Kanpan