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for Daywalker

by TrueNosferatu

person armybats
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
parts of this story sounded so much like the frist part of the Hellsing manga. but it's still good.
person 7omkat
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I want to like this... i really REALLY do but this "script" form of writting is really distracting me from your story. In my opinion it break from the flow you have when i was reading your prologue. And speaking of your prologue it was AWESOME!! *gives the author a cookie* I'm going to re-read and try again!! You have soooo much potential!!


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person Mysticalwarrior88
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!