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for Dark Temptations

by Crystal07281987

person StoryJunkie
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Darn, I liked her.
1) he said he'd be right over, then "several hours later"...
2) she wasn't afraid of someone coming over to her house, a total stranger, who a normal, cautious girl would meet in a neutral location. As soon as he hung up, my heart would have been pounding and I'd be taking a walk. A really long walk.
3) Sex was OK. Guy was hot. Excellent story and arousing.
person Carmen
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it's me again i luv yo work its sexy
person Anon
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! i didnt expect the ending! how scary! :D great story.