rate_review Reviews

Love... Love....Love!!! All your stories. I do remember reading your stories before, I was was so upset when I couldn't, but I'm so glad you repost them again. I would love for you to continue with this story. kepp up the the great work. Waiting anxiously for your next update. hopefully soon.

muy buena, excelente, ana maria

Needs a bit more editing, but I like. :-)
It's definitely one of the best in this category.

Brilliant story.

This is quite different and interesting. Good work, I like your writing style!

I love this story and I'm so happy you updated it. I hope he meets Sherry. Please updated soon.

Okay, I'll start with the story. I thought that your story was really well done. I mean that it was one of the best that I have read so far. I have read a lot of your writing, but I feel that this was the best so far. Though, I don't know how Irreconcilable turned out yet. Anyway, I have to say that I loved the way you moved your story in a complete circle, Starting with the AD and then ending with it. It was a good anti-climax/posible connection for a sequal. Also the seen where Rosa was haunted my Darius was very well done. You were able to create a suspense that both unpredictable and thrilling. The final thing that I have to say is concirning the way Jade was turned into a Vampire. I, too, have a fasination with vampires and I found it very interesting how you seemed to put a twist on the way that Vampires are created in Hellsing, though it came out to be very much your own. I am really quite impressed by your overall writing abiliy. I can usually tell what a person is like through their writhing, and I believe that you are one interesting person. I would like to get to know you more o a friendship level. Really, don't think that I have any alterior motives. If you would be so kind as to write to shadey!!!!!!!987!!!!!!!!@!!!!!!!!ya!!!!!!!hoo.!!!!!!!!com . (Subtract all the ! I just want to keep it as low on spam as possible). Thank You for the great stories and I hope to read more in the future.

Good story so far. I love Darius so far. Just a couple of critiques. Work a little on your paragraph structure and see if you can make them a little smaller, or divide them, even if it means adding more details here and there. I found it hard to read the especially long one where Jade was preparing for her night out. It got hard to read after a while. Also, scan over it again and see if you can find unnecessary words. I noticed one here and there. Anyway, good job. Good characters, and creepy vampire.

hhhhmmm this is starting to get very interesting....

YOU ARE AWSOME!!!! i LOVE vampires! and black hair and dark green eyes...YUMMY....^-^ you freaking rock!!



~LB~