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July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LIKED IT MY FAVORITE ONE WAS (BELLY BUTTON BOUTIQUE)AND THE LAST TWO WORDS PLEASURED SIN WAS HOT.TELL ME ARE ALL YOUR ABOUT SEX?CAN SOME ONE SAY *VIRGIN*?HE,he,he i kid i kid.
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February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ah, the scenic route... i much prefer it to the highway. i like the imagery a lot, and i really liked the rhythm of this one.
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
19 ~ i like the rhyme. cute.
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
re: tease & swallow ~i've never felt that from the other side. i didn't realize i hadn't felt it till suddenly i wondered at the loose in my hips and the tight in my throat... thank you.
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
re: 16 ~and again you create imagery that comes from within... my blood thrums in rhythm with your verse.
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i'm reading after you've posted thirteen 'chapters'... some of them positively took my breath. others laid there, hinting at intimate moments for which i have no context with which to interpret. and one or two even pulled my face closer to the screen, like an invisible hand curving around the back of my neck, compelling.
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your story gives me a happy feeling inside^^