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by Elfy

person Dani
schedule June 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t remember if I reviewed this before, but YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE!!!
person Anon
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Maybe if you added another chapter rather than just play the "edit to bring it to the top" game all the time, you'd get more reviews. You wrote this story over a year ago, yet it never gets any further back than 3 or 4 pages. Who are you kidding?
person Anon
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ignore comment above. I have your story mixed up with someone elses so I'm the idiot. I'll read your story and review it soon.
person Anon
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very hot story, yes you should continue this. The "play" style puts me off a bit, but it's still very well done.
person dazee
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Eeesh, please continue
person JaidenMalfoy
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT

I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT
person pistol
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow.. great story! looking foward to reading more!
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome work. I really enjoyed your descriptions. I've been trying to write some good lesbian erotica, and trying to read as much as I can to get a good grasp. If you've into S&M you can check out my 'Session 001' story. Again this was a really good fic are you going to continue?
person kaka
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon, i dont like the spankin but all the pussy stuff is good, let them find something like a hairbrush that can be used.
person anonymous
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you should have chrissy capture one of them or all bond them to something and do them. maybe she can even take them home and tie them to her bed. she could use that sleeping drug to transport them and violate them a little