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for Whimpers

by MultifacetedTune

person Yuuyami
schedule June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahahaha.... What a lovely piece to come home to after babysitting toddlers for two days straight. WITHOUT anything slashy to speak of, I mind you. How delightful, I simply must say. I really can't think of anything complementary aside incoerehant fangirl babbling, so I'll just leave now. *thumbs up.* Good show!
person Anon
schedule June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
anything with a lemon of those two is great with me!
person DeadUchiha
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah, well, that absolutely a pwp! Heh! very well written! The first chapter i was a little confused because it seemed like it was m/f but then in chapter 2 it wasn't...XP. Ah well, i am dumb like that i guess. XP Bah, I'm not really in an insane type of mood so forgive my boring review. XP I'll have to read it agian when i am not stone sober i guess. XP Anyways, even though it was short it was packed full full to the brim with smut! XD i wonder who they are? Well, i guess it could be anybody playing out a dominant and submissive thing...really the only tie i noticed at all to this maybe having a story was the part about the pet being purchased. Hmmmm.... Ah well, if you update this be sure to let me know so i can check it out! XD good job!
person Kaay-chan
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH YES YES YES MORE MORE MORE I LOVE IT!!!!! EITHER CONTINUE OR DO THE COMPANION FIC THINGY!!! I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS!!!!!
person me here
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh me or my that was HOT! Ugh I love your story, very good, I loved it! Such a shame that there is no more since I'm pretty sure I saw that it said it was complete now....how sad. Oh well, good job anyways!
person Shadow
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Never gave up checking up on this one. I was happy to see something new. I'm not all for the 'love' thing. Mushy stuff... but very well written anyway. Glad your exams went well, mine are mentally breaking me (in the less sexy sense of the expression)
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it very good, althoguh they don't have names you can just picture the emotion each has, very well writtena nd emotion capture *nods* and i'm walking in circles becuase im tried yup yup... ^_^
person Red hematite
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes! I love chocolate, lol. And I think this chapter was perfect. I loved how you describe the feelings and the dialogue, it was very interesting. The ending was just perfect. The emotions you portrayed were wonderlful. I'd love to read the other story you wrote. I hope you'll post it soon. I'm happy your exams went well. Amazing job! I loved this story.
person Anon
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhh i think this fic needs more!!
person Anon
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn that was hot!!!!