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person Linz
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok So that wasn't so bad. I love Lain and Ben, and Michael and Ryan are so totally growing on me! Ben is never letting Lain out of his sight is he? Ok So the masked man has to be dear old step dad, right? Or it could be someone from Ben's not so stellar past. As much as I want to see more mystery I would still love to see the inner workings of teenage love! Hear about Ben's past too and all that good stuff....Isn't it Lain's father's memorial too? By the way I also love that mom cooled down a bit. Maybe even Ben's baby meets Lain? Anyways this is just my imagination running away! Keep up the awesome work...more soon, very soon please!
person cynlie
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!!!! O_O!!!!!! i can't emphasize that -enough-. I'm dying to know what happened! Is it Ben's father? OMFG UPDATE please i'll never beg again, but cliffhangers are just plain meaaannnn...
person cynlie
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you...you...>.>;;
person cynlie
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
everytime i review your story it cuts off part of my comment...oh well. Please could you also update your other stories? I love all of them darn you =)
person Linz
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME! Thanks for the Lain and Ben stuff! I really hope that's BEn at the window again and not the evil stepfather...but at least if it is the evil stepfather have ben save poor lain! Can Ben come to the service too? I'm sure mom would love that! Also, I'll review 100x's if that means you get the chapters out! God I love this story~
person Linz
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS AWESOME! I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE! I Like Michael and Ryan, but Lain and Ben are just so much more! Can't wait to see what happens next with Lain and Ben!!! Keep up the good work you are doing an amazing job!
person cynlie
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you.are.so.awesome.O_O.update!!!!! hehe thank you for writing!
person Linz
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok so I am one of those bad readers who doesn't ever leave feedback, but after reading this story I just HAD to...It'sAMAZING!!! Please don't leave us hanging and continue ASAP...I need to know what happens!
person cynlie
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HURRY IT UP ^^ please. i can't wait to read more this is great stuff...*gives you cookies, milk, a pretty christmas tree, and some coffee.* update update ^___^!
person Anon
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Writing the title like that makes you sound not so serious about the story (I mEaN lIkE tHiS). The story was better than I expected it to be though.