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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok Let me first start out by saying 2 chapters in one night WOOT WOOT!!! But you had to leave us there? I'm going to throw some to Tirk's advice back at you "FIX THIS AND FIX THIS NOW" I love lainy and benny! I want them together forever, and baby Jacoby too! I'm a sucker for the sap in case you hadent realized! I WANT MORE MORE MORE MORE~~~~YAYAY...PS> AWESOME JOB!
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok well i'm confused now :] great 2 chaps! Can't wait! MUST KEEP WRITING DAMNIT!
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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
In chapter one you say that Bens mother probably knew they were togeater because they hang out there all the time, and then you say that ben lived on his own since they were 18. It's a little confuseing.
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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK, that's just not nice! You leave us there? Of all places....GET LAIN TO BEN, NOW! Lain and Ben forever! Ok so I admit it Michael and Ryan make a cute couple too! But that was wow, amazing! I never expected it so soon either! MORE MORE MROE MORE MORE! Thank you!
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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wtf is murphy's law? AND HOW COULD YOU KILL HIM?!?!?! YOU MURDERER :] oh well i can't wait for the next chapter! GREAT JOB and Happy holidays!
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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O UPDATE! UPDATE NOW! must...... know....... what........happens..........next...... *twitch twitch* is RC going insane?............ maybe.
anyways! great story! so glad i finally got around to reading it!
anyways! great story! so glad i finally got around to reading it!
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December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE (get the idea) this! So awesome! I know how busy the holidays are, if I wrap another gift I may scream! Keep this up it's amazing, and don't have Lain's uncle kill ben, maybe he can help ben?! Jacoby is adorable! Can't wait to read more but I can until after Christmas!
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December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MERRY CHRISTMAS AND A HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!
Hope you get everything you wanted and have a great fresh start :] and keep updating after xmas!
Hope you get everything you wanted and have a great fresh start :] and keep updating after xmas!
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Best Chapter EVER! There are just so many cute things it's insane! The Benjamian/Ben thing, How sweet he stayed and dressed for Lain, it's just too cute, and the hickey? HAHAHA...The funny thing is these two are just so realistic in this chapter! I love it! More NOW please!
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter, filled with Happy thoughts ^__^ just in time for xmas too! Merry Xmas or Happy Holidays! and i never buy ppl xmas presents, it just gives you a tumor :P And the only ppl that give money to each other are the chinese cuz most ppl think its rude to give others money. It's inconsiderate and they feel like poor people. bwahahahaha =)