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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your story is really interesting! I hope that Alex ditches the whore and moves onto Zak soon (as well as a lemon scene ; ) Keep up da good work!
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Erm, I was reading your reviews, and is it just me, or are people acting a little bit more bitchy than usual?
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aw cmon ben killing people isn't that bad...he's a good guy! I can't believe you let him get raped though omfg -.- well UPDATE
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG WHAT THE FUCK is with the FUCKING AUTHORS NOTE??? O_O??? *chomp* grrrrrr...authors notes are completely useless!!! Get your ass on writing the next story i can't believe they raped Ben wtf?! That's just cruel! IN FRONT OF A KID...ok i'm overreacting but that chapter was seriously messed up in a greatly written but mind corrupting way. Just update really soon...do uncles send people to rape their nephews? If they do then you have one strange mind :] still love you though UPDATE!!!
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok So I saw two chapters up and got really excited only to find 13 isn't a read chapter..ahhhh...but it's ok Iknow you'll make up for it!!! U better. Can't wait to see lain, Ben and Jacoby as a family, it has to work out it just has too!!!! MORE NOW PLEASE!
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol, All I can say is that it was still fantastic! Hmmm, but what about this guy Derek? Did he go to Lain's house? And why would the uncle order him to do that? - He loves Lain.
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You updated the summary! This is much better, gives a little info into the storyline. Thanks
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey - I love this story! Honestly I read the whole thing today, I couldn't stop. The one thing that kept me from reading it sooner was the SUMMARY. Which never caught my attention, at all. Anyway, a friend told me about it and from there I discovered it. Please keep going!
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh wow.......... you update fast......
I
NEED
NEXT
CHAPTER
NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!
(and i will never be satisfied even if you update three times in one hour ^_~)
I
NEED
NEXT
CHAPTER
NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!
(and i will never be satisfied even if you update three times in one hour ^_~)
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Merry bloody Christmas all right. GIVE ME ANOTHER DAMN CHAPTER!