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person slashlover
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a good story! You are really talanted, I must say. I was late for school because of this... But it's okay, it was worth it = ) More please? You can't leave us haning!
person dwelf
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love all your characters! lain is a love, Ben is too hot for his own good! Mickael, alex, Zak and all! Keep up the good work, you really seem to know where you are going and that helps a lot too! But you have to admit, it is a real deal, getting a whole family package at 16, hell I m glad it's not me there! Then again love rises mountains! Thanks for this sweet story! Did i mention I love it!
person travis
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*frowns*whats mikes problem?hes from bens past right?surely he must know that this greg dude would try to hook ben up to drugs again.i've been wondering,are ben and mike just friends or have they ever dated?good story.update again soon :)
person Yit-Ha
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yays!!!! ANither chappie up! Go you!
person travis
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
......dont know if you noticed but you got ryan mixed up with alex. ?
person travis
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very good story.good chapter. :) very hot
person Anon
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
about time! i was starting to think that Lain was going to remain a virgin celibate forever but YAY! great chapter! loved it!
person cynlie
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i tis proud of you! yay for the sex scene! ^_^ you did a great job too! *finally they did it!* hehe...will there be more trouble? and how about alex and zak...ahhh update really soon please! thank you =)
person herc
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*bangs head on keyboard*lain is always saying he wants to sleep with ben.will they ever?
good story this is.so cute.i love it.update.
person cynlie
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow...update!!!!!!