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by quickshot101

schedule February 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
mooooooo
person nipplets
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ew, sex with a twelve year old.... it wasn't written very well.

where did this take place?
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i opoligize for my bad details but this is the only true story i will be writing and i will not change any of the details to make it true...i only left one of the negative reviews becuase it acctually said something
person Alex
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your story is terrable even though it has yet to be completed, it lacks all train of thought, and detail on most all levels, i think you should take this back to the drawing boards