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person PJ Zatken
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just love Lucifer, Gabriel, and Michael. It's kinda cute how there's so many stories out there that use the same characters, but each writer has his/her own flair in characterization of these angels.

Well, hun... I love the chapter... and thank goodness for the update... I was soo waiting for it ;-D

person D
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You still never stop amazing me on how well you and the mad hatter write it is like reading magic on a page and everytime i read a new chapter I can't help but bring the emotions you put there into words in my head and in my heart.I love the comedy between the sad the happy and glad between the glommy and sad.The best parts in the new chapter are the wood shop sence all of it was good and the sence between darian aqnd cricket,those two are as funny as a frog in alaska.I love it all and hope it keeps on coming.Well you and Mad Hatter Keep up the good work and keep it coming!Cant wait for the next one.Love and respect,peace out D
person PJ Zatken
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I love angel and demon stories, and this is a really good one. The characters you and Dennis have created possess an element of mystique, plus I love descriptions in a story...it helps me picture what the author's seeing.

And I love what I see....

Keep up the good work, guys ;-D
person Zatken
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, very good chapter two.... I love Thomas in this chapter, and I love the way that you both painted this world that your characters are moving in. It has this element of grit in it, and I can't wait for the angels and demons to show themselves....
person Zatken
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man, that was a good chapter. You guys know how to build tension in a story...as well as an evil cliffie. How could you leave me hanging like that? LOL
person Zatken
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY, they get together LOL.... I was waiting for that to happen for the past three chapters and going like "get it over with already...."

And so they did, and it was good ;-D
person Bel Jaide
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Four, in one word, is Beautiful. I can't wait to read more!
person xpxuxnxkx
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...hahahahahahahahahahahaha
person D
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the story kinda went down hill in ch.4 but it was still pretty good but wtf was with the gay stuff it made me sick to my stomach but other than that Darien is a little flacky well anyway keep up the good work and keep posting ch.'s well for the inside scoop this is D later 2 D
person D
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wtf where is the new ch. you said it would be up today! man waiting suck hurry plz know you are busy but fenning is bad too oh shhshane said nice work with his charter and ty for the choice of song well HOLLA at ya'll later @ D