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for My Trinity

by dark1starr

schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! That was mean!! Especially with the brother appearing. But you did a great job! I love it!
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL , Okay yes. Mean and yes Ouch. These are demons though. To them THAT is pleasure. Who needs sexual relations when they can get off by causing someone to break a part body and soul.


schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! Why didn't I see this coming? hehe I hope everything turns out all right.
person Too
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this stoty its reak good. I hope you keep it up.
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is an intriguing story. I really like Missiva (sps?). She's very courageous, especially in that last chapter. So that vidal that the Demon King gave Trinity basically made her stay 13 forever right?
person Loopypants
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really neat! I can't wait to read more!
person killisandra
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey starfyre,
just read your new story 'My Trinity' and it sounds good. I'm eager to see where this heads. Keep up the good work.
Blessed Be,
Sandra
person anime00
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love your other stories, and im starting to like this story as well! update soon
person Serendipity
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is interesting. I must say Starfyre, You have a flare for the unique. Update! Oh and update your other story! Now! please?
person Anon
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well this is going to be interesting! please update soon!