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what?! you can't just delet this story!! its really good... really it is!!! this is one of my favorite story... sooo yeah.. i hope you update soon.

whaaaaaa?? tha's cruel :( please don't delete your story! i only started reading it recently, and since then i've been waiting and waiting for you to update.

sigh :( deleting a story as good as this one would be a crime.

you can't delete this, it's just started to get interesting. I'm working on the chapters at the moment and have just taken a break to see if you had updated. Will shoot you an email when i've finished.
Cheers,
Sandra

Please update. Don't make us wait. I want to see what happenes next. Hurry and review People! just five more after this!

SHallow? Hardly. Shallow is all the pointless smut. This is a smut site and this is what you want to see. I understand but I am not that a way. The plot is here. I however, believe in developing my characters. The next chaper is coming. Then it is chapter 9 which introduces someone else. That someone else starts to thicken the plot and thicken the feelings in the story. I am sorry if you are impatient and can not wait for the chapters. This is just how it is. I will not compromise the plot or chapters because someone thinks it needs to go faster.

ALL My stories have a purpose. Read Serenity and Blood of Three kings if you want to read something that is completed now. You will see there is always a point, even if I take a little time to get to them. This one has a point. It will be gotten to but not before it is time. Her being kept at Thirteen is but ONE of the things. It is not the only thing.

I suggest being patient if you do not want to read the others and wait on this one. I promise there are worse stories on AFF. Their plots are pointless and the smut isn't worth the keyboard it is written with. People still love those because they are smut and pointless. Mine are better because I involve actual creativity, imagination and drive to put something more into the story. The characters are developed. The plot is thought out and I do NOT compromise the plot. Again, sorry if you feel that way still but my only advice is to be patient.

Starfyre

hmmmm i have to say im more then intrigued now and well who dosent like pixies especially evil ones like that

The plot thickens indeed! How do you do it? How do you put your self a demon's mind set like that? I like this story alot more now.


Butterz!!

Hugz n Kisses!!!

Okay what is the point f this story. There is no change in the girl she will remaine that age forever but I don't get it. Is it gonna be a Claudia episode and she kills her master, are they gonna have sex or have kids or fight some battle or what? It seems like pointless dribble to me. Hopefully it will turn oout good. Put a bit more thought into it though so it seems more that what it is. Right now the whole thing is way to shallow.

Ouch! ouch! I do not want ot meet that fellow. No way. Ouch! It makes me cringe just reading that. Good torture though. You certainly aren't compromising and making them any less nice just because the readers. That isn't an insult. I mean well, that you are keeping them in character, which is good.

I like this story too. I like Serenity better but I do like this one. Your plot bunnies rock.


Butterz!!

Hugz n kisses !

ok i think that kid is gonna be scared for life...although i think its not gonna be a long life and well you know the girl shouldnt have meesed with entropy demons if she didnt know what was going to happen