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i would like more but i understand the stress of completing a story... it was a good tory though and any addition would be welcome on my part at least

It was awesome i loved it i hope that happens with me and the vampire in my books *pulls her mind out of the gutter* lol keep on with it!!

Option 1. However, I think you should delete it till just before she goes for the walk in the park, start the second chapter there. Even how Joshua woos here is rushed, so that whole scene should be drawn out into a chapter...make it realisitic. People don't fall in love over night...Amy would be hesitant, need time to think...you can have chapters of their romance, conflicts et cetera...there is alot here! Seriously, don't be discouraged just because you think you can't write endings. Write the story first...think of an ending later. I read this, and I see like a good long story...this was not meant to be a one-shot. It's insulting to your muse if you do that. I select Option 1. But you are the author...if you feel that you can not do this story justice, then Option 3 it...Option 3 being that you delete it completely, because it's just too wonderful of a story to leave with such an ending. Sit back, take a few deep breaths, and just pick through the story...find the thread of the storyline, because it's there. I see three different places you can take this story, and I"m just a viewer! Consult your muse...don't let the pressure build, and just let the story flow...don't worry about the ending...it'll come.

I defiantly go for the first option, but u don't have to delete the last chapters just kinda pick up from where they left off some years or centuties later. Its up to you

YES you better continue this story I wanna see if jen get a sexy vampire and plus this story is very good plz continue.
I hate when there are really good stories and the authors don't continue so plz, pretty please with what ever favorite topping on top?

option 1

i was digging the story until the abrupt end. i was thinking it could have developed into more chapters. glad you're at least considering it

I loved it.Got have more.

PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!! I NEED DETAILS!!!!

Oh, and it was really good.

1 You dont have to write a book but the end was a bit abrupt and i liked the plot

What happend? It was so good but then, that last paragraph killed it. You need to go back, delete that ending and write it out the way that you were writing in the beginning. you have talent.