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for FIRE OF THE NIGHT

by Kat1975

person kirsty
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter, cant wait till u update!!! they r cute together.
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked that latest chapter. It´s good that they approach each other slowly instead of just beginning to shag. You´re doing a great job in giving the characters more depth.
person ayasi
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter. they finally start to realize the feelings they have for each other. please continue soon. I'm looking forward to reading more of this story. Actually, I'd love to give you a much more detailed review but I'm just so tired since the clock already reads 3 am here.
person blackbird
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was your best chapter so far two thumbs up for that :)
person Anon
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is definitely one of the best stories that I've ever read here! keep up the great work!
and i LOVE this chapter
person sara
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter. how you explained it all each detail of the date, please keep writing like this. we can feel the love growing for these two and it's great. i'm happy with this chapter and i want more.
person sara
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just read this story and i love it. so full of life and romance. it brings joy yo my heart to read a good ol' love story from time to time. please update soon. :)
person Christina
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was an excellent well written chapter. It brought out the emotions of the characters without you actually stating how they were feeling.
person kitkat
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hay! that's great, they both got it bad. Great chapter,! keep up the good work!

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person annelise
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just to let you know... I love love love your story. I really do. Can't stop reading it!