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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cant wait til u update again...so much passion
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Doing good so far.
Work on some of the sentence structure. Keep your tenses the same too. You switch from past to present a few times.
Waiting for the next chapter.
Work on some of the sentence structure. Keep your tenses the same too. You switch from past to present a few times.
Waiting for the next chapter.
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
UK = Unknown Kacie
UPDATE, DAMN YOU!
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UPDATE, DAMN YOU!
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
darn it! update!
it's one of the few things i look forward to everyday-- to see an update! :p
it's one of the few things i look forward to everyday-- to see an update! :p
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this!
i'll be waiting for your updates! great work :)
i'll be waiting for your updates! great work :)
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
im so excited for the next update!
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have no need to be afraid we might not like this chapter, on the contrary, I loved it even more than the last one. I enjoyed the morning scene very much, specially the shower scene (snicker). The tension you created afterwards was great. Well not for Gerry and Tamsin but you know what I mean ;)
I wish you lots of fun at the beach and I wish us happy readers fast updates when you return ^^
I wish you lots of fun at the beach and I wish us happy readers fast updates when you return ^^
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww i feel so loved lol .........but for real like u r really good at writing . its hott lol well cant wait to read more ttyl
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ha! thanks for the shout out!
I love the direction the story is going. gooooood, great, grand stuff.
updaaate.
I love the direction the story is going. gooooood, great, grand stuff.
updaaate.
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep going witht he story, it's wonderful!